In Version 2, you developed a working thesis and critical-connections outline using your eight core sources and two selected artworks or projects. In this stage, develop that outline into a critical analysis, using the feedback you received on Version 2.
Complete the steps below in order.
Step 1: Review and refine your Version 2 critical-connections outline
Start with the critical-connections outline (bullet points) you completed in Version 2 and the feedback you received.
Do not begin by writing a completely new analysis. Use your Version 2 work as the starting point and strengthen the ideas and evidence you will develop in the critical analysis.
Together, review and revise, when needed:
- your working thesis;
- the main concept, question, or tension in Critical Connection 1;
- the main concept, question, or tension in Critical Connection 2;
- the relationship between the two critical connections;
- the specific evidence you identified from both artworks or projects;
- the passages, concepts, quotations, page numbers, or timestamps you selected from your sources; and
- the eight core sources in your annotated bibliography.
As you review the outline, use the feedback you received on Version 2 to clarify ideas that are too broad, unclear, unsupported, or disconnected from the artworks.
Your thesis should:
- make a clear statement about the artist’s practice;
- establish the main focus of your analysis;
- connect to both selected artworks or projects; and
- present a position that you can develop using your research and artwork evidence.
Each critical connection should develop part of the thesis rather than introduce an unrelated topic. Make sure you have specific artwork and source evidence to support each connection.
Before moving on: You should have a clear thesis, two focused and connected critical connections, and enough specific evidence from the artworks and sources to develop the 500–700-word analysis.
Step 2: Write the critical analysis
Develop your Version 2 outline into a critical analysis.
Your analysis must connect:
- both selected artworks or projects;
- both course readings;
- at least 2 additional academic sources;
- at least 1 primary artist source; and
- at least 1 critical or contextual source.
Use the sources to help you analyze the artworks, develop your critical connections, and support your thesis.
For groups of three students, you must include the Student C’s resources and selected artwork.
Organize the analysis using the following sections.
Introduction (75–100 words)
Establish:
- the main research question;
- the focus of the analysis;
- your thesis;
- the two concepts that organize the analysis; and
- the two artworks or projects you will examine.
Give the reader enough information to understand what you are investigating and the position you will develop.
Critical Connection 1: Concept + Artwork 1 (175–250 words)
Develop the first critical connection from your Version 2 outline.
Explain:
- the concept, question, or tension you are investigating;
- how the course readings help you understand or question this concept;
- an important agreement, difference, or tension between the readings;
- how another source adds context, evidence, or a different interpretation;
- specific evidence from Artwork or Project 1; and
- how the artist’s methods, materials, technologies, or decisions connect to your interpretation.
Do not stop at describing what the artwork looks like or what a source says. Explain how the evidence supports, develops, or complicates your thesis.
Critical Connection 2: Concept + Artwork 2 (175–250 words)
Develop the second critical connection from your Version 2 outline.
Explain:
- the second concept, question, or tension;
- relevant ideas or evidence from your research;
- specific evidence from Artwork or Project 2;
- relevant methods, materials, technologies, or artistic decisions;
- your interpretation of this evidence; and
- how this connection differs from, extends, or complicates Critical Connection 1.
Connect this section back to the thesis rather than treating Artwork 2 as a separate artwork summary.
For groups of three students, include Critical Connection 3: Concept + Artwork 2 (175–250 words)
Conclusion (75–100 words)
Bring the two critical connections together.
Explain:
- how the analysis responds to the main research question;
- what becomes clearer when the two artworks and concepts are considered together;
- how the analysis supports, develops, or complicates your thesis; and
- an important tension, limitation, or unresolved question that remains.
Do not introduce a completely new argument in the conclusion.
Checklist: Review and revise the analysis together
Use this checklist if useful to check that your document contains the required information.
Together, read the entire analysis together and revise it so it works as one connected text, not two separate pieces joined together.
Check that:
- The thesis is clear and consistent throughout the analysis.
- Sources are brought into conversation rather than summarized one at a time.
- The evidence supports, develops, or complicates the thesis.
- The two critical connections are clearly connected to each other.
- Claims about the artist, artworks, communities, and contexts are supported by evidence.
- The analysis clearly distinguishes what the artist states, what other authors argue, and what you interpret.
- If used, Quotation marks are used for a source’s exact words.
- If used, APA in-text citations are included for ideas, information, paraphrases, and quotations taken from sources.
- Repeated information and unnecessary summary have been removed.
- Transitions make the relationships between ideas clear.
- Both partners have reviewed and approved the complete analysis.
- The complete analysis is around 500–700 words (175–250 words more for groups of three students).
Before moving on: You should have one complete, connected critical analysis that uses specific artwork evidence and research to develop and support your thesis.
Step 4: Prepare the critical analysis PDF
Prepare one PDF per pair containing the critical analysis you completed together.
Your PDF must include:
- Both partners’ full names and student numbers.
- Artist or collective name.
- Complete critical analysis.
- Revised annotated bibliography with all 8 core sources.
Name the file:
P1_V3-Critical-Analysis.pdf
Before moving to Stage 2: You should have one complete collaborative PDF containing your critical analysis.